xaveyy (xaveyy) wrote,
xaveyy
xaveyy

Peer Review!!

Hey Fiorella,
really nice reference to the evoked emotion from Brooke's "The Soldier". The constant allusion to the patriotism described in the quotes from the poem, are the essence of what Brooke has captured in with his "The Soldier". 

Would be careful about saying "proves how the dust conceals the soul" only because with poetry and dead writers and subjective conception, one can hardly prove nor disprove anything but the meaning they have derived, but that's cool, i like what you wrote about the meaning for the soldiers in the text were at peace and that's a great feeling.

regards, Xave.
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